Jolande (phoegan_leisha) wrote in punctuators,
Jolande
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punctuators

Repetition: quick-fix question

I feel that this sentence: "It could be so calming it could cause one to do anything for them." Is incorrect.

What would work better: "It could be so calming as to cause one to do anything for them." Or something else entirely?
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